As I looked through the window, it was pitch black and frozen outside.
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Friday, 13 June 2014
Creative Paragraph Writing
Class 7 Literacy were learning to write for an audience. We wrote a paragraph to begin a story for the picture below. We then choose the most enticing sentence and each wrote a paragraph beginning with it.
As I looked through the window, it was pitch black and frozen outside.
As I looked through the window, it was pitch black and frozen outside.
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As I looked through the window it was pitch black and frozen outside. And all I could here was shadows moving closer and closer until I screamed so loud I hopped out of my car and started running fast until I got home I was so terrified and scared I never want to go there again I had nightmares. THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the window, it was pitch black and frozen outside. Out of the corner of my eye a shadow slinks by. A shiver rolls down my spine. Terror strikes!
ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the window,it was pitch black and frozen outside.I couldn't see a thing it felt like i was blind.Then I saw a big shadow I was scared .
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ReplyDeleteAs i looked out of thought the window it was pitch black.I could see some shadows going by they look like zombies coming toward me then i screamed and ran away and went and hide.
DeleteAs I look at through the window, it was pitch black and frozen outside. And he steering it me like in a shadow. And then he was gone and was no where to be seen.
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ReplyDeleteAs I looked out the window, it was pitch black and frozen outside. As I stepped onto the grass I left a white footprint. As I was walking down the pitch black road, I was shivering cold and I could not see far.
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ReplyDeleteAs l looked through the window. it was pitch black and frozen outside. when i stepped outside my hands was frozen cold then I heard a whisper saying get back inside I didn’t
ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the window, it was pitch black and frozen outside, but when I wiped off the window fog, my eyes saw nothing. Except for one thing… I saw something flying above my head. I thought it was batman, but when I looked up I never saw batman, I saw a ghost looking down at me as if I was its dinner.
ReplyDeleteAs I was In the car it was dark and frozen it looked like ghost was floating around the distance!!!!!
ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the window,it was pitch black and frozen outside I saw a shadow passing by and it looked like a ghost was saying “Come out come out wherever you are”.
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ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the window, it was pitch black and frozen outside.As I looked at the dark road I see the trees wooling around like a wolf.
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ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the window, it was pitch black and frozen outside and there were zombies outside and there was one in my bedroom then I step the zombie
and ran to grab my rifle then I said “ it’s coming right for us” boom headshot THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ReplyDeleteAs i looked through the window , it was pitch black and frozen outside. As i walked on the Drakkiss road on Earth i feel really black in side of me.
ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the window,it was pitch black and frozen outside.When I noticed that it was pitch black outside and frozen and cold I jumped out of the car and i frozed.
ReplyDeleteas i looked through the window it was pitch black and frozen.when i stepped outside my hands was frozen cold then i heard a whisper saying get back inside i didint
ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the window It pitch was dark and frozen outside ,I saw a dark shadow passing by it felt like there were ghosts surrounding me.It was saying in a creepy voice “COME OUT COME OUT COME OUT”
ReplyDeleteAs i looked out of the window it was pitch black.I could see some shadows coming towards me it looked like they were come to get me i screamed and ran away.
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DeleteAs I looked through the window,it was dark pitch black.I couldn't find my way out,Now I am late.
ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the window it was pitch black outside. As I looked through the window it was pitch black outside. As I was driving down the dark creepy road I heard a voice saying to me “Jessica Jessica come out of your car’’.
ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the window, It was pitch black and frozen outside. As I was Walking, I was freezing, then I realized that I was on the road and it was dark and I couldn't see at all.
ReplyDeleteAs it was dark I couldn't see anything but pitch black I was frozen as ice. I couldn’t see that far As I was walking down the forest.
ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the Window,It was pitch black and frozen outside. After a wild I hear a girl screaming ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!.It was dark black
ReplyDeleteAs I look through the window, it was pitch black and frozen outside. I took one step outside and couldn’t feel my feet I was so scared because I felt like someone was watching stocker me like a hawk so I ran back to the car. This time I prayed and prayed for it to start FINALLY! it started i speed my way home home sweet home but are you home?.....
ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the window It pitch was dark and frozen outside, I saw a very unusual thing outside. It was a scary witch staring at me with its big creepy eyes.
ReplyDeleteAs i looked out of the window it was pitch black.I could see some shadows coming Towards me it looked like they were come to get me i screamed and ran away.
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ReplyDeleteAs I looked through the window it was frozen outside and the rain was pouring all the lights switch off i started to hear a strange noise I got my samurai sword but when I opened the door there were zombies everywhere so i shut the door but one got through the window but I cut it with my samurai sword the it died
TO BE CONTINUED
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